WALT make a pick-a-path story.
WALT write interesting sentences by adding detail.
WALT use Google Slides in different ways.
We created this using Google Slides.
You need to open the slides so you can choose you own adventure!
ADD Pick-a-path:
File / Publish to the Web / Embed / Small / Every Minute / publish / OK.
Copy the link
HTML / Paste the link / Compose
(Here is Thomas's AMAZING work!)
Reflection: 2 stars and a wish
Question for the reader:
Labels: Google Slides, 2019, Pick-a-Path, Writing
We are year 3 and 4 learners at Mangonui School in New Zealand. Our teacher is Mrs Masters
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
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Friday, 29 November 2019
Monday, 13 May 2019
My Family Publishing
WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.
Here is Mackenzie's Writing from this week. Each students has published their work on their individual blog. Please look at their blogs to check them out!
My family
In my family I have Mum,dad ,my brother and me.
My dad is called Lawrence.
He is a builder.
my dad lives in Cable Bay.
He a 39 years old.
my dad was born in Auckland.
He likes to watch TV.
My mum is Shannon.
She is 38 years old.
she Lives in Cable Bay.
She was born in Auckland.
She likes to eat chocolate.
My brother is called Liam.
He is 6 years old.
He is my brother.
He is very annoying.
he lives in Cable Bay.
He loves to watch his tablet.
I have a cat his name is Robbie.
He is cute, he is grey.
He likes to sleep in my bed and my mum's bed.
He is 1 year old.
He lives in Cable Bay.
I have a cat called Molly.
She likes to sleep in my mum's bed.
She is black.
She is 21 years old.
She is cute.
I have a puppy called cookie.
She is naughty because she chases cars.
She bites me and i say “stop it!”
She is one year old.
She is cute.
She is black.
My dog is called Welo.
She is 11 years old.
She is cute.
She likes to sleep in the sun,she is black.
I LOVE MY FAMILY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reflection:
I did well on the paragraphs and spelling names
I wish I could have more key words.
Here is Mackenzie's Writing from this week. Each students has published their work on their individual blog. Please look at their blogs to check them out!
My family
In my family I have Mum,dad ,my brother and me.
My dad is called Lawrence.
He is a builder.
my dad lives in Cable Bay.
He a 39 years old.
my dad was born in Auckland.
He likes to watch TV.
My mum is Shannon.
She is 38 years old.
she Lives in Cable Bay.
She was born in Auckland.
She likes to eat chocolate.
My brother is called Liam.
He is 6 years old.
He is my brother.
He is very annoying.
he lives in Cable Bay.
He loves to watch his tablet.
I have a cat his name is Robbie.
He is cute, he is grey.
He likes to sleep in my bed and my mum's bed.
He is 1 year old.
He lives in Cable Bay.
I have a cat called Molly.
She likes to sleep in my mum's bed.
She is black.
She is 21 years old.
She is cute.
I have a puppy called cookie.
She is naughty because she chases cars.
She bites me and i say “stop it!”
She is one year old.
She is cute.
She is black.
My dog is called Welo.
She is 11 years old.
She is cute.
She likes to sleep in the sun,she is black.
I LOVE MY FAMILY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reflection:
I did well on the paragraphs and spelling names
I wish I could have more key words.
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