My Family Publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

Here is Mackenzie's Writing from this week.  Each students has published their work on their individual blog.  Please look at their blogs to check them out!


My family

In my family I have  Mum,dad ,my brother and me.

My dad is called Lawrence.
He is a builder.
 my  dad lives in Cable Bay.
 He a 39 years old.
 my dad was born in  Auckland.
 He likes to watch TV.

 My mum is Shannon.
 She is 38 years old.
 she Lives in Cable Bay.
She was born in Auckland.
She likes to eat chocolate.

My brother is called Liam.
  He is 6 years old.
 He is my  brother.
 He is very  annoying.
 he lives in Cable Bay.
 He loves to watch his tablet.

I have a cat his name is Robbie.
He is cute, he is grey.
 He likes to sleep in my bed and my mum's bed.
He is 1 year old.
He lives in Cable Bay.

 I have a cat called Molly.
She likes to sleep in my mum's bed.
 She is black.
 She is 21 years old.
She is cute.

I have a puppy called cookie.
She is naughty because she chases cars.
She bites me and i say “stop it!”
She is one year old.
She is cute.
She is black.

My dog is called Welo.
She is 11 years old.
She is cute.
She likes  to sleep in the sun,she is black.

I LOVE MY FAMILY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Reflection:
I did well on the paragraphs and spelling names
I wish I could have more key words.